ext_75509 (
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2007-09-08 04:26 pm (UTC)
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Intriguing so far. I'm rather excited for the next part. *nod*
I know you had lack of beta so I just thought I'd point out that in the line "I can't wait too hear this" the "too" should be "to". >_> I'm a bit of a grammar freak at times.
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I know you had lack of beta so I just thought I'd point out that in the line "I can't wait too hear this" the "too" should be "to". >_> I'm a bit of a grammar freak at times.