http://game-byrd.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] game-byrd.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] flying_monkees 2011-08-13 05:29 am (UTC)

Awesome job! At first I was 'wha? What happened to Sylar's powers?' and then I was 'wha? What happened to Peter's characterization?' and then I was 'OMG! That's cool!' as it all made sense. Peter sounded weird initially because you were doing a perfect job of writing him just a little 'off', because he *was* off. Yeah, he just doesn't do 'menacing, psycho killer' as well as Sylar does. :D

He just needs more practice, surely. ;)

Thanks for sharing.

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