Thanks. This whole thing was a bitch to figure out where to break it into chapters, so I tried my best. Cliff-hangers suck, but it's one way to get people to come back. *evil laugh* I'll probably put Chapter 2 up tomorrow.
I'm glad you like the dialoge, I always feel like I get too talky in my stories.
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Date: 2007-09-08 08:01 am (UTC)I'm glad you like the dialoge, I always feel like I get too talky in my stories.