That Which Was

[flying_monkees]

“….The serial killer has been tentatively identified as….”

 

Click

 

“..the murder of over 95 people. Police believe they now have a suspect and are in the process of apprehending him….”

 

Click

 

“…if you see this man, under no circumstances should you try and apprehend him! Please call 911 immediately and stay away from him….”

 

Snap

 

Mohinder turned off the TV. He couldn’t believe that the police had finally figured it out. After so many special people had died! And he felt responsible. It was his fault that the murderer had met and killed so many special people. If he hadn’t let him come with on the road trip! Sighing, he stood and went over to the window, staring at the street below.

 

Ninety-five people! And as if the police could stop him. There was no one left in the world that could stop him anymore. The cheerleader, Claire, was dead as were Matt Parkman and Hiro Nakamura and so many others. Even the one person that could’ve stopped him had been killed. Killed in such a gruesome manner and Mohinder suspected that he had enjoyed every moment of it. Tears slid down Mohinder’s face, thinking of how the poor man had suffered under such evil. Mohinder was the only one left that even had a clue what the police were up against and they wouldn’t listen to him!

 

He had loved him, at one point. Without reason, passion making him blind to what should have been obvious. And now the guilt of that made him wince. If only he could turn back time, undo what had been done. But there was no turning back, no redemption. Love didn’t conquer all.

 

And he knew. He knew that the devil with the charming good looks would be after him, would be coming to kill him. He had guns hidden around the house but it wouldn’t do any good. Nothing could kill him. Nothing could touch him. And he would know what Mohinder had in mind even before he knew himself! 

 

The door behind Mohinder suddenly shattered into a million little pieces. In the doorway a figure stood, dressed in black. Dark brown eyes glared at Mohinder. Mohinder stared at the figure, seeing his death come at last.

 

“Peter!”

Comments

[nightjool.livejournal.com]

Interesting for a first post. You have a good start.
Also, just a note: "Love didn’t concur all."--I think you meant "conquer" here, right?
Continue and develop your plot line/ bunny here: these folks can help you.

http://community.livejournal.com/heroes_betas/

[flying-monkees.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the fix. I thought I had caught everything. And thank you also for the link to the betas, I'll have to make sure to use it next time.

[ivy-b.livejournal.com]

Oh what an evil twist! I liked it, now I'm wondering about your roadtrip that Peter and Mohinder went on... Very good job.

[flying-monkees.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it. I always wondered "what if" Peter was the evil one and not Sylar. I never thought about writing about the road trip but now you've put the plot bunny there! I'll have to work on that one.

[capn-mactastic.livejournal.com]

'lo
liked this (hey, i like twists and bad peter, it was guaranteed)
hope you don't mind but i've added you to my friends list

[flying-monkees.livejournal.com]

Thanks! You're my first friend on here! I don't mind at all, and I'm glad you liked the story. I'm working on a prequel thanks to the plot bunny that ivy_b gave me.

[flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com]

AH! I did not see the end of this one coming. And he killed Sylar!! *hates Peter in this fic*
This was brilliant!

[flying-monkees.livejournal.com]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked! Well, except for Peter killing Sylar. I have a thing for twists sometimes, and this was the result of one. lol But don't hate Peter, I'm working on a prequel that will explain why he did these things.

You must be going back and reading some of my *coughawfulcough* older stuff. *snicker*

[flwrpwr-vampyre.livejournal.com]

Yeah I'm reading some of the archives and I'll be keeping an eye out for your stuff.
I can't wait for that prequel.